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Comment by Avril Kirby on September 7, 2015 at 4:35am

Yes, Peter, it's better. Like your take on it, Doug--the table cutting through the middle was unnecessary and an interruption. I may use your idea and do my own swath of light.

Comment by Peter Freeman on September 7, 2015 at 12:26am

I like the long perspective dark view, makes it a little sinister, film noir style.

Comment by Avril Kirby on September 6, 2015 at 12:25pm

Thanks Doug--I was keen on that spill of light down the front of the second one but I know what you mean.

Comment by Avril Kirby on September 6, 2015 at 7:33am

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